Slot Cars

Cars race

Trigger finger

Challenge

Speed up

Slow down

Speed past

Beep beep

Vroom

Excitement

Focus

Corners

Too fast

Flip over

CRASH!!!

 

by Keegan

One thought on “Slot Cars

  1. Keegan I love your poem! You’ve done a great job using alliteration and assonance…even if most people wouldn’t notice it….to help paint a picture of slot cars. You’ve got a good eye for detail and can express things very well.

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