Cars race
Trigger finger
Challenge
Speed up
Slow down
Speed past
Beep beep
Vroom
Excitement
Focus
Corners
Too fast
Flip over
CRASH!!!
by Keegan
We Are The Champions
Room 20's world of work
Cars race
Trigger finger
Challenge
Speed up
Slow down
Speed past
Beep beep
Vroom
Excitement
Focus
Corners
Too fast
Flip over
CRASH!!!
by Keegan
Keegan I love your poem! You’ve done a great job using alliteration and assonance…even if most people wouldn’t notice it….to help paint a picture of slot cars. You’ve got a good eye for detail and can express things very well.